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Artsy stuff, mainly writing.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#ScribesAndMakers Aug 14 - Our next featured creator differentiates himself from his "name buddies" on his website. Do you share a name with anyone famous?

My pre-marital (is that a word?) is very common and a famous crime author shares it. (No relation.) My new hyphenated name should be pretty unique.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#ScribesAndMakers 12. August How often do you take mental breaks from your creative work?

I don't if I can help it. I have plenty of work from clients and other hobbies, so I never really feel the need for a planned break. When I have an emotional low my writing tends to dry up.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#WordWeavers 09 What's the smallest detail you've researched for a story?

A few things come to mind:
- different types of carving tools
- what does it feel like to be stabbed - the answer in surprisingly, that usually you wont feel it immediately
- what distance can humans and horses cover per day
- and based on the previous question: how many days prior to arrival would characters be able to see a certain landmark?

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#WordWeavers Aug. 13
What's the most unexpected source of inspiration you've ever had?

Electrical windmills slowly turning in a thunderstorm as I was riding by in a train. This is where Rainbringers started - and I will get around to writing their story yet.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#WritersCoffeeClub Aug 9: What’s a subject you’d like to write about, but haven’t yet?

Speculative fiction paired with climate optimism. More hope for the future is needed! I do have an outline already, but want to wrap up at least pt 1 of the current WIP.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#WritersCoffeeClub 13.08. Do the arts appear often within the works you write? Which ones?

Yes, though not as highbrow Arts, but rather as part of everyday life: Songs sung for entertainment, decorative carpets covering floors, runes on weapons interlaced with ornamental carvings, intricate patterns stitched on the hems of clothing, books written to teach wrapped in a story. Creativity is not usually expressed in isolation, but always as a part of something useful.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#WordWeavers 12. Aug
If your main character had a comfort food, what would it be?

For N it's definitely fish chowder, especially if his mom made it - which was a rare treat. He kind of regrets now, that he did not consider it important enough to learn while still living at home.

For S it's fresh cream cheese from goats milk, and thin flatbread with dried fruits. She does know how to make that herself, and odes make it in the book.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#PhantastikPrompts 16.08.
Wofür "brennt" deine Hauptfigur?

S hat sich in den Kopf gesetzt, dass Dunkel (ein Monster dieser Welt) jagen ihre Mission ist. Sie ist sehr fixiert auf alles was sich darum dreht.

N wiederum liebt es zu tüfteln, am liebsten magische Artefakte.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#PhantastikPrompts 13. Aug: Kommen in deiner Geschichte besondere Bücher vor?

Ja. Eines spielt eine besondere Rolle, weil es den Codex enthält dem eine Gruppe mächtiger Charaktere folgt. Der Codex ist ca 4000 Jahre alt. Vom Codex existiert immer nur eine Kopie. Die letzte Kopie war ca 300 Jahre alt, und wird gerade aus dem Gedächnis derer, die den Codex kennen, repliziert, nachdem die letzte Kopie vernichtet werden musste, um nicht in falsche Hände zu geraten.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#PhantastikPrompts 12.8.: "Welche Bedeutung hat Macht für deine Hauptfigur?"

Ich habe zwei Hauptfiguren; für N ist Macht wichtig und auch Ziel - Rache ohne Macht, was ist das schon? Läuft allerdings alles nicht wie geplant. S möchte vorallem einfach tun was sie für richtig hält. Läuft auch nicht wie geplant.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#WritersCoffeeClub 12. Aug -  What’s the last museum you went to? Did it inspire you?

The Akureyri Museum would have been the last. It's a small museum about the history of Akureyri which also has a large collection of historic maps of Iceland.
I have learnt to really appreciate these small often suprisigly good local museums - and this one did not disappoint either. I learnt a lot, but I don't think there's anything that will directly go into my WIP.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 9mo ago
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@SteveBellovin@infosec.exchange Cats used to have a rich civilization, which humans whiped out. No traces remainin, since they used to live in cardboard boxes. @Argonel@dice.camp @cstross@wandering.shop
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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

Finally took some time to do the population modelling for my WIP, which I care about, because I like it when even in a fictional world the math be mathing.
I was very pleased to see, that I do not have to hold back on the deadliness of the world, which supports the story I am telling very well. So, for that alone that was worth it. But it also gave me the opportunity to sense check the narrative, compare it to real world examples and get some inspiration for points that could be more pronounced, which I also like.

#writing #writingCommunity

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 6mo ago
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@weirdestate This kind of ad makes me wonder if people realise that sea levels are rising...?
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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 7mo ago
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@SuzyShearer So sorry for your loss.
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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 8mo ago
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@stavvers Now that's the kind of alt text we should all aspire to. 😄
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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 5mo ago
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@weirdestate Cabin in the woods taken to new levels. Is that an abandoned church repurposed into a honeymoon shack? Retaining it's function as a place of worship? My authorbrain says this is an amazing setting for all kinds of horror.
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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 6mo ago
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@loebas If I had money to waste, that would be a nice fixer upper... @weirdestate
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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 1mo ago

#PennedPossibilities 1100: Who is the most challenging opponent your MC has ever faced? What did they learn from them?

They face monsters and powerful people, but their toughest opponent is their own ego.

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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 5mo ago
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@Lionesslady@mindly.social No. It feels like a super complex world exhausting me even as I read, but giving me zero taste of the story or mood or reason to care for the protagonists. From this blurb I still have no sense of what this is about. In the blurb I would expect to get a sense of the central conflict of the story, at least one of the protagonist and maybe a bit of fluff. But only enough to make me want to read the first pages.
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mandrake @mandrake@hachyderm.io
· 5mo ago
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@Lionesslady@mindly.social For this version a few questions:

  1. Do readers need to have read the other books for this book to make sense? If yes the references make sense, if not I would add it maybe as a half sentence somewhere for the fans, that this is in the same universe but no more. Also, be honest about it. I read a supposed 'standalone' book set in an exsisting universe, and it was the most bizzare read, because clearly the author expected readers to know the place.

From the blurb, I think this is the strongest section: "The Northern Church, thrown from power, is not taking their fall from the king’s favor well, the king himself is struggling to manage the chaos he’s inherited, and the desert Families are being forced to reinvent themselves in a world no longer ruled by the ha’reye and ha’ra’hain.

Against that background, Lia of Stecatr and Tank of Bright Bay must confront the lies and truths of their past."

I would replace a few commas with periods in the first paragraph to give each struggling faction their space.

"the chaos he’s inherited" - maybe one or two words more to make "chaos" more specific. What is chaotic: power, money, war, political, natural disaster? What is his challenge?

"the desert Families are being forced to reinvent themselves in a world no longer ruled by the ha’reye and ha’ra’hain."

  1. Without context, I have no idea what this implies, so if this is a standalone work I would try to describe this conflict with one or two words more to make this clearer to the newcomers.

  2. Does this reinvention bring them into conflict with the aforementioned parties?

Do Lia and Tank belong to any of the conflicting factions? If yes, are they on the same side?

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