Pandora Downloaded

Chapter 16 - Breadcrumbs

Bethany remembers how she met the gang as the Madame gives her a ride on her sky car, inadvertedly revealing a painful secret. Agent Williams is starting to look for clues regarding Bethany's whereabouts.

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Hi guys!

Some announcement. I've been in hiatus since a few months ago due to family circumstances. Right now I'm getting back, but I'm stuck on a chapter.

I'll still be slow to post due to chapter rearrangements and my general lack of free time, but I haven't abandoned you guys!

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Hi folks, I just uploaded a rewrite of chapters 3 and 6-12.

There was some character exposition missing, as well as an unnecessary scene in ch. 3 which I removed. Additionally I split chapter 7 in two, so chapters 8-11 got moved to 9-12.

I believe this will solve some of the pacing / chapter length issues so far.

Thank you.

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Chapter 17 - Scheduled maintenance

Jane tells Bethany that she has to move to the citadels with her grandparents; she does not take it well. Pearson goes to the 5th precinct to get briefed about the case.

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The moment we've all been waiting for: The coroner examines the victim's body, CSI-style, while we replay the crime scene at the very moment of the crime.

Some surprises await, and the victim's family had many enemies...

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Yay!!! 🥳

I decided to start publishing my novel on Scribblehub.

Hopefully this will get more people interested.

Reviews will be much appreciated 🙏

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/671162/pandora-downloaded--a-cyberpunk-thriller--crime-drama/

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Guys, anything happened with other instances? hackers.town and lgbt.io seem to be offline, or it's just me? 🤔

EDIT: It was just me, my network cable was unplugged 😅

Chapter 20 - Bad Request

Bethany reluctantly agrees to meet her grandparents in the citadel. So many questions come to her head: What do they expect of her? Why do they want to take her away from the ground? Will she have to remake her life as a Victorian? Meanwhile, Pearson has more concept-induced nightmares, and the line between fiction and reality starts to blur.

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Chapter 18 - Handshake

It's late night, and detective Pearson decides to enjoy his first night in New Hong Kong, by visiting the Venus Club. It could also be the perfect opportunity to meet the girl in the poster. Could she be the culprit in this case? Only time will tell. In the meantime, why not enjoy a nice view?

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Chapter 15 - System Migration

Pearson leaves the hospital, healthier than ever and with a new job: Private Detective. He finally departs from the States to embrace the first day of his new life. New Hong Kong, here we go!

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What can eight years of unhealthy eating and sedentary life do to you? For Pearson, it wasn't just the weight. With his arteries clogged, Pearson found himself fighting for his life on the back seat of a cab.

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Whoops, I forgot to post chapter 12!

After learning of Catherine's demise, Jane has a mental breakdown. Here we follow her and Lillian as they bond over the family loss, while we also learn some secrets about Lillian's androids, Ana and Gisela.

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I see lots of people are starting to follow me.

May I ask, where did you hear about me?

Chapter 19 - Full Duplex

There are three ways to know a man: Put him in a tight situation, get him drunk, or put a beautiful girl in front of him. As Elizabetha starts flirting with him, Pearson is struggling with his hardest decision in years.

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@thomasfuchs@hachyderm.io I am fond of the VR hype, and still long for the day it stops being vapor 😅

@NickEast@geekdom.social @writers@a.gup.pe @writingcommunity@a.gup.pe @writing@a.gup.pe @authorindiespeak@a.gup.pe Lawful Plantser here 😁

@lucy@corteximplant.com I'd love to see some example posts, but it seems your post history got truncated? 🤔

My updated chapter 8 is up on Scribblehub! https://www.scribblehub.com/read/671162-pandora-downloaded--a-cyberpunk-thriller--crime-drama/chapter/685606/

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Among the changes, we have a flashback of Bethany going to juvenile prison (CW: Bullying, violence, Suicide), Vixen's experiences as a homeless android in the city, and a new plot with the bad cop plotting to kill Bethany.

Only 4 chapters left until Scribblehub and my website are in sync.

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